My
holidays ft. Tomy Glavich
I´m having a fantastic time
in Miami. There are huge beaches, the water is clear and the sand doesn´t
have shells. The weather is always sunny, but yesterday it was raining. In the American winter, Miami doesn´t have a really cold weather because it is near
the Caribean.
Yesterday morning, I
had breakfats at the hotel with my friend, we ate the american breakfats all the days, it was delicious. After that, we went to swim at the
swimming pool of the hotel, a few minutes later, my friend told me something great, he fought with a security guard the other night in the disco, he
won, he is huge and a really good fighther. when we went out of the pool, it was raining so we stayed all the day at the hotel, because it is all inclusive.
Tomorrow, we´re go surfing in the beach and playing soccer with some friends that we met in the hotel. at night we race a competition cars in the streets of MAIMEEE, like fast and
furious.
We are returning home on monday. Today is friday, we can do some things more,but we are exhausted. We did amazing things this week, but I think is time to return home. This holidays are the best.
Bye, peace and love
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