My Terrible Holidays
I´m having a terrified weekend here
in the Caribe. The weather is hideous and freezing. I`m not having a relaxing
holiday. =(
That `s really unlucky because my uncle
said "The weather is fantastic and you will love this place" and I thought
“Yeah, I really would like the boiling weather and I would have a great time"
Yesterday morning I visited
a Water Park and went to the beach and I sunbathed. I stayed on the beach
two hours and went on an expedition to the City and bought souvenirs. When I arrived in the city, a storm started here .I saw many people were runing to the hotel
or their houses, while I stayed in the pavement getting wet in the rain. When I
was back in the hotel I was exhausted and went to bed.
Tomorrow I am going to visit the museum or
go to the shopping .If doesn`t rain I´m going to go on canoe trip and then I´m playing cards and waiting flying home.
I think I´m sick. °~°
by: Lila Torres
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